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Hi folks! I just wrote a text in English, but I’m not an English native speaker, I’m from Brazil, so I would like you to review these 4 paragraphs and change the parts where there is any mistake… Could someone do this for me please? I really need this help! ­čśÇ

The text is the following:
Psychics: earn reputation and get a million dollars
Do you have psychic abilities? Can you talk to dead people? Can you predict the future? Can you read cards, palms, etc? You’re not the only one. There are hundreds and hundreds of people who claim to have a little knowledge beyond this world. Among the most famous psychics are Sylvia Browne, Rosemary Altea, James Van Praagh, John Edward, etc. They appear to be insulted when people say that what they do is a cruel farse. This sort of behavior can be noted in the following paragraph, said by Linda Rossi, Bussiness Operations Manager at Sylvia Browne Corporation: “It is so sad that many in the public will afford any other professional such as doctors, lawyers, and even law enforcement the right to be human and to be wrong, but not Sylvia.”
According to what they say, it seems they have no opportunities to prove that what they do is real. Let’s find out if that’s true.
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James Randi is a skeptic, magician and demystifier of paranormal and pseudoscientific claims. Moreover, he’s the founder of the James Randi Educational Foundation. The James Randi Educational Foundation is an educational resource on paranormal, pseudoscientific, and the supernatural. The JREF organization offers a one-million-dollar prize to anyone who can prove any paranormal, occult and supernatural event or power of any kind, under proper observing conditions. Here we go: this is an extraordinary chance to prove that what you do is real, whatever it is. You might talk to the deceased, predict events by interpreting celestial signs, know everything about someone you have never met before, doesn’t matter, if you have any psychic ability, you can be tested by the JREF and, if you have the psychic powers that you claim you have, you will get a million dollars and earn reputation!
Is there something better? I guess the main thing a psychic would like to have is a good reputation as an internationally renowed spiritual medium! All you have to do is visit randi.org and fill out the form to be tested by the James Randi Educational Foundation.

Thanks!

Answer by AileneWright
1) I would change the title to: Psychics: Earn credibility (rather than reputation)….
Also, the word following a colon ( : ) should be capitalized.

2) After Linda Rossi: Business (not Bussiness)

3) After The James Randi Educational Foundation is… paranormal and pseudoscientific are both adjectives and need subjects such as paranormal ACTIVITY, pseudoscientific CLAIMS and the supernatural. (Supernatural can be used either as a noun or an adjective).

4) After the JREF organization… I would change “proper observation conditions” to “controlled observation”

5) After Here we go…I would use a period (.) in place of a colon (:) and start a new sentence.

6: My new sentence would read: This is an exciting opportunity (not extraordinary chance) to prove that what you do is real; (punctuation changed to a semicolon[;], not a comma[,]) whatever it is.

7) You might talk…. This is a MAJOR run-on sentence and needs to be broken up. An example could be as follows: You might talk to the deceased, predict events by interpreting celestial signs, know unexplained details about someone you have never met; it doesn’t matter. If you have any psychic ability, you can be tested by the JREF. Then if the psychic powers you claim to have can be scientifically documented, you will be given a one-million dollar prize and gain the credibility you deserve as an internationally renowned spiritual medium! What could be better than that?

8) Also note that it should be internationally (renowNed, not renowed).

Leaving the text as you wrote it is fine as well. It will be easily understood by readers. These are all just personal suggestions (other than the misspelled words Bussiness and renowed). The nice thing about the English language is that it is very flexible.

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